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Your ability to capture the teenage voice is always on point. You capture the gross essence of the fish flies both with your artwork as well as your dialogue. Love this so far and am greatly satisfied with this "new" way of presenting the story. (I think I read somewhere that A Tale of Two Cities by Charles Dickens was originally presented in small parts similar to this in the 19th Century!)

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Agreed about the panels link at the top

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Just a note on the downloads, if possible I'd recommend adding the download to the top of the page instead of the bottom so us who read the full chapters don't accidentally see a spoiler scrolling to the bottom. I'm glad you're allowing for both ways!

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Love that first page, the lettering with the art inside is rad!

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Kind of confused on the last chapters can any one help me out? Is the implication the store clerk somehow got shot and is now running away?

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