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Really enjoying the story. Was the wrong form of "your" used on page 3 an intentional way of revealing character? Nice touch, if so. :)

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This is awesome. Loving the story so far.

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Really enjoying these on my phone, looking forward to the physical release

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Man, those last 4 panels are so good. "...Don't know. 'Cause you need help." Love it.

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It's getting harder to stop each week, but also making me anticipate the drop on Fridays.

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Another great tranche of story pages. The story becomes more and more intriguing as the pages I get to read increase.

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I’m loving reading the new instalments each week. It’s helping me learn to be more patient.

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I am really enjoying this story.

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